Meta to take legal action against Israeli spyware firm NSO, foils phishing attacks


 Your original sentence is understandable, but it’s slightly unbalanced because it combines a future action (“to take legal action”) with a past action (“foils”). Here are cleaner versions:

Best corrected version (news style):
Meta to take legal action against Israeli spyware firm NSO Group after foiling phishing attacks.

More formal:
Meta has announced plans to take legal action against Israeli spyware firm NSO Group following its disruption of phishing attacks.

Headline style:
Meta to sue NSO Group after foiling phishing attacks.

More journalistic (balanced):
Meta said it will pursue legal action against Israeli spyware firm NSO Group after detecting and blocking phishing attacks.

Emphasis on security action:
Meta to take legal action against Israeli spyware firm NSO Group after stopping phishing campaigns targeting users.

More formal corporate tone:

Meta has stated it will initiate legal proceedings against NSO Group following the disruption of phishing activity on its platforms.

Concise headline options:

  • Meta to sue NSO Group after blocking phishing attacks
  • Meta targets NSO Group with legal action over phishing attempts
  • Meta moves to sue NSO after foiling cyberattacks
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